I’m not as pleased with this one. I think I needed to make the hair pop more given the more glowing tone. Still. Thought I would share. Edited with permission.
I think the problem is not the tone but the lighting representation. Her skin is supposed to be darker behind her since it’s receiving much less sunlight in comparison with the front, try to make her skin tone behind her much darker to compensate with the shadows. You can see it in the original picture.
excellent critique advice. It was an experiment, but I see what you mean.